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for Time as a Healer

by neelix

schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Carine
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi neelix,
so an ignorant Severus proposes to take care of his own pregnant fianc
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
she just needs to give him the memories...oh please update soon xxxxx
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, one thought. The bacon caught fire? That'd be a grease fire, you can't put out grease fires with water unless you want a mini-explosion on your hands. You can smother it by putting a pot lid on it or dousing it with flour, but not water. Great way to get really scalded.
person neelix
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Blimey... Imagine thinking of the health and safety implications in the middle of a love story!!

Thanks for pointing that out... I will make an amendment.
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :)

really nice :)

been reading this story but hadnt had the chance to review, its such a cool and different story, i like it very much :)
person Carine
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi neelix,
the last chapter was so amazing-LOL-so Severus' cock twitched in recognition when he saw Hermione.I always knew that there has to be some truth about the rumours that men only think with their pricks.I can't wait to read more (((H)))Sureves Epans
person anncee
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww his body remembered her even if his mind does not =] i love it! keep it comin!!
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not just choked up. You actually made me cry a little. This is fantastic! I can't wait for more. Hope you update soon!!
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Come on Severus..remember her!! Loved it xxxx