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You make my day before it has begun (3 AM and I've yet to fall asleep). But I really liked how you made Draco speak French, and portrayed Draco's feelings, as well as Harry's. Wonderful job. :)

I was feeling so sorry for Draco! Beautifully written, thnak you so much! Now, going to read the companion piece...SP

Hey - I just wanted to let you know I think your story is terrific - really nicely done. You drew out Draco's sense of unnease and confusion so well, how he writes it off as sickness because he can't admit the truth. The ending was very nice indeed; there's nothing better than that moment of realization for Draco/Harry (and the rest of us reading along) when they finally figure it out... Let the shagging reach new heights! And please, by all means let us watch - yum. My only comment would be how Draco reveals in the beginning that's "its always against a wall" even though he thinks Harry deserves better, but they end up in bed at the end of the piece. I had a moment of vertigo; was Harry lying in the alley? Oh! Duh! They're in a bed! I liked them there, and it made sense they would progress there as things went on (more comfortable walls, if nothing else!) I just missed how they got there. NO CRITICISM intended. You've got a wonderful, clear style and great ideas that you develop well. Thanks for sharing them. Cheers.

I had to read this again. It's just so good.

Ooowweee!!! Speak that french, baby!!! SPEAK IT!!! :-D

Man, I just love it when I read 'Draco-speaks-French'. *sigh*

It's not called the language of love for nothing.

By the way, glad to see you writing again.

I so did not know this was out and so after reading the birthday fic I looked you up and there it was! Beautiful fic. Draco loves him but doesn't want to say it. And poor Harry wants more from him but draco wont give it. I liked how in the end it was rather ambiguous as to whether or not Dracc will fufill Harry's wish, even though he says he will. Lovely fic!

This is the 3rd time i've read this & I cry everytime.
Please write a sequel. I just love the intensity of the story.

I'm another one on an end of term wind down - and I adored yours!

My French is appauling, though my other half's isn't that bad - he knows lots of naughty words in French. lol.

This was an absolute pleasure to read, well written, packed with emotion and a happy ending.

12/10

Hey
I speak french and I just wanted to tell you that your french isn't wrong but it does sound a bit too formal. Maybe you could write <> instead of <