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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm....it'a a bit difficult to review this chapter as there's not a whole lot to go on, but I am glad to see Harry and Ron ahve been rescued. I guess I'd have to say also that I was surprised, although not quite sure why, to see that Severus had been arrested with the rest of the Death Eaters. I guess it makes sense, however, as he was there and it would look suspicious if he weren't. I'm wondering if this isn't all some sort of convoluted plan of Dumbledore's......I guess I'll have to wait and see. This chapter has left me a bit unsettled because of all the questions I have, so please, hurry and update!!
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope this isn't one of those stories where it only takes a few moments before Harry is ready to forgive Snape for everything he has put him through. This ordeal is something Harry has to live with for the rest of his life. If they do end up together it should be years into the future and after hours of therapy! Still there is no way for Harry to have his old self back.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whens the next part coming.
I like this story for some reason.
I like this story for some reason.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa! hurt him not me ? wow ive read all your stories and love everyone of them and even though this one is so different i still love how you portray the characters poor harry...but keep up the good work you rock one of my fav authors update please and feel better! {from one of your american cousins.}
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They broke him...Im sad now. But I want more!
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Not at all what I expected!! I never would have thought Harry would beg for Ron to suffer instead of himself. Although, after 9 chapters of torture it's a wonder he can even speak at all. I was quite shocked to read that! But...Severus. I want to think he's redeeming himself, is helping Harry by what he's told him, but.....with you, who knows? Having Harry beg for Ron to suffer rather than himself totally threw me for a loop, and so now I don't know what to expect! I had hoped Severus would be in some way on Harry's side, but now......grrrrr! Blast you!! And, of course, you leave it as a bit of a cliffhanger! Update!!! Immediately! I must know!!!
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... with this this title to the chapter and the chapter itself I can picture Harry's innerself holding on desperatly before something in his eyes dies and he lets go, falling
It's short and very moving this chapter.
It's short and very moving this chapter.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL????? HARRY YOU BACKSTABBER!!!!! HOW COULD YOU HE'S YOUR FRIEND!!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!! I wanna know what happens soooooooooo bad!!!!
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Ron has been told that his well being is up to Harry
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are one sick puppy but I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
I am sick also, so keep up the good work.
email with the updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com, thank you!!!!!!!
I am sick also, so keep up the good work.
email with the updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com, thank you!!!!!!!