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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as always, you amaze me.
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jesus. You could just feel the pain when you read that chapter. You are such a brilliant writer! It was amazingly done! So....tell me Harry isn't dead!!! PLEASE!! Please update!!
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please i am happy that your plot bunny is so hoppity. i agree that as much as harry had not wanted sex with snape it was still consented.wrong of snape but consented. update again please your stories never dissapoint me
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must agree with those saying Snape raped Harry. It is not as if Harry had a real choice in the matter.
If a person gets a child to give him sexual favours by saying he will hurt his family if he refuses, how is that not rape?
If a person gets a child to give him sexual favours by saying he will hurt his family if he refuses, how is that not rape?
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I felt compelled to review after that nasty cliffhanger, if only to tell you that's a rotten place to stop. J is right, and you do seem to enjoy torturing your poor readers a little too much.
I like the story, even if it is dark and scary. Poor Harry, opening the door to the person he least expected to see. I didn't see that coming at all, but with you, I'm really not surprised. I don't understand Snape though. Well really, I don't understand any of it in regards to where you're going with this plot, so I guess I'll just have to hang around for the ride, huh? I'm sure you've got it all just as well thought out as the rest of your stories, so yeah, can't see where you'd really need any help, although I'm sure your other reviewer was only joking. And for cripe's sake, have some pity and update soon before J wears my ear off with how mean and cruel you are!!
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What's with your review page? It's about a mile wide!
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you need to start working on the next part NOW!
If you would like to brainstorm with me, email me and we'll see what we can come up with^^
-arien
If you would like to brainstorm with me, email me and we'll see what we can come up with^^
-arien
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18: This Chap was almost worthy of Hitchcock! Creepy!
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh jesus! You just looooooove to end on a cliffhanger neh?! Well hurry and update!!!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 15, 16, 17)
Yay for rabid plot bunnies!
There's always so much to consider in your stories, which is what makes them so enthralling. It's not only the physical actions and reactions of the characters, but the mental and emotional as well. Harry...thinking he's coping and comforting himself by turning his room into a replica of the cell he endured being tortured in, thinking he's in control by taking a knife to himself, cutting and making himself bleed, finding sexual release by mimicking what was done to him. And the name he called out as he did......
And then Severus, damaged in another way. After reading his responses to the questioning at his trial, I can't help but wonder if all the years spent under Voldemort's and Dumbledore's thumbs, of having to walk such a thin line in order to preserve his cover, the exposure to and having to kowtow to a madman's wishes, if some of Voldemort's evil hasn't worn off into him.
So many questions....and your talent for misdirection is both frustrating and enjoyable at once! Grrr! You say in the AN's for the first chapter "Please don't expect happiness at the end and resolution, as it isn't going to happen." but then you also say "Bad things are going to happen to good people for no obvious reason..." Its those lines that keep me wondering (and grinding my teeth!) as to whether or not I take them at face value, or do I look for the hidden meaning. And don't blame me for that! It's you that taught me to do so with your other stories! And that's why I can't help wondering.....and even more so now, given some of the answers Severus gave at his trial......other than Harry and Ron, who are the "good" people that bad things happen to?
I hope those bunnies will gear up and go into overdrive, cause I want another update! Soon!
Yay for rabid plot bunnies!
There's always so much to consider in your stories, which is what makes them so enthralling. It's not only the physical actions and reactions of the characters, but the mental and emotional as well. Harry...thinking he's coping and comforting himself by turning his room into a replica of the cell he endured being tortured in, thinking he's in control by taking a knife to himself, cutting and making himself bleed, finding sexual release by mimicking what was done to him. And the name he called out as he did......
And then Severus, damaged in another way. After reading his responses to the questioning at his trial, I can't help but wonder if all the years spent under Voldemort's and Dumbledore's thumbs, of having to walk such a thin line in order to preserve his cover, the exposure to and having to kowtow to a madman's wishes, if some of Voldemort's evil hasn't worn off into him.
So many questions....and your talent for misdirection is both frustrating and enjoyable at once! Grrr! You say in the AN's for the first chapter "Please don't expect happiness at the end and resolution, as it isn't going to happen." but then you also say "Bad things are going to happen to good people for no obvious reason..." Its those lines that keep me wondering (and grinding my teeth!) as to whether or not I take them at face value, or do I look for the hidden meaning. And don't blame me for that! It's you that taught me to do so with your other stories! And that's why I can't help wondering.....and even more so now, given some of the answers Severus gave at his trial......other than Harry and Ron, who are the "good" people that bad things happen to?
I hope those bunnies will gear up and go into overdrive, cause I want another update! Soon!