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Wow this is a great fic. Please continue writing!

(Chapter 22)

Wow. This was an excellently written and powerful chapter. I was happy to see Harry walk off and leave Hermione and her nosiness behind. He doesn't need her nagging right now. On the other hand, knowing Harry, he'll soon be off doing something reckless.

Severus and his whole obsession thing....something about this doesn't ring right. I would like to see more of his inner dialogue, or know more of what he's thinking. And I hope he somehow manages to make Lucius pay.

Can't wait for the update. So get to it, Missy!

Snape is seriously twisted in this story!

(Chapter 20)

First of all, I'm glad to see you've updated! Yay!

This was an excellent chapter with an interesting twist....and a nice bit of misdirection at the beginning! At first I thought you'd killed off Harry, what with Severus thinking he was beyond all help, and was so relieved to see you didn't! (Or haven't yet...one never knows with you!)

The bits with Severus' thoughts as he wanders his dungeon prison were great. We're finally seeing what motivated him, and an expalnation for, his actions towards Harry. And yes, I too think Lucius deserves to suffer, greatly, and I hope Severus finds a way to make sure he does.

I'm not quite sure where you're going with this...or how it will turn out...but I can't wait to find out, so update! Soon! Don't make us wait so long again!

(Chapter 21)


I actually feel sorrier for Severus than I do Harry.

I love it that I can't tell, or guess, in fact, have absolutely no idea where you're going with this! It's so unpredictable and that's what makes it so good. The suspense, as they say, is killing me! And the ominous words at the end. "There's a storm coming...*shivers*


Please update soon!!!

You did warn that it was Dark and I read as far as I could go. I can wait for your next story .I read these story purely for fun

Only as far as the beginning of Part II right now, but I thought I would pause in my reading to leave a review. A fascinating and interesting work so far (though I'm not sure what that says about me!), original, characters are pleasantly in-character despite the somewhat 'unusual' situations you have placed them in and there seems to be a real plot instead of simple hedonistic violence. I don't like fics where the abused character enjoys being molested despite themselves and I'm glad to find there is none of that in this story.

I like Harry's response at the end of Part I, it reminds me of Winston's (disturbing yet realistic) reaction to his torture at the end of Orwell's '1984'. A nice touch! Well done and thank you.

. . . I think this is the longest review I have ever left for anything. :)

NOOOOOOOOO!

but I'm still not speaking to you!

(and this is still not a review!)

(Chapter 19)

Well, you've updated, so I guess I'm speaking to you again....

It was nice to read a chapter from Severus' POV, but it was frustratingly ...vague. All we really know is that he is indeed obssessed with Harry, but none of the why. Which, I'm sure, you intended! And, you know.....I don't believe Harry is dead. And, no matter if I find myself disappointed in the end, I can't yet believe that there isn't, somehow, some way, redemption for Severus. (and yes, I know it's bad grammar to start sentences with "and"...shut it!) AND, for the love of God, Woman, enough with the cliffies already!!!!!

*whimpers*