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for Glory in the Forest

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww this is perfection
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's wonderful. I loved that. It is sad that you have made the aurors take on a more physical stance by actually making them curse Draco, but I like the way Harry handled it here.
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo sooo love this!
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful darling.
person Jilliane
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Oh!

That was beautiful, and so moving.

Wow...just...

Wow.


person Yume111
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very beautiful, I almost cried.
There is a very distinctive mood to this story, calm, sort of somber, but ultimately peaceful.
I loved, as always, the language, and also the images you used, for instance the silver in Lucius
person sonykit
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.. i mean it.. the imagery, the words, the plot.. everything was great.. bringing in the unicorns as a way to rid draco of his guilt was very original. it gave the story both depth and emotion. the way you wrote the unicorns was so credible and vivid - i could just imagine draco nuzzling it. i admire draco here, especially with the way he doesn't clamor for attention even when he's hurting, physically and emotionally. the way he wanted to redeem himself yet believing he would never be able to was really great. i love harry, so sympathetic and sensitive. i love how he thought of the unicorns instead of people. in short, this is one well written one shot. ;)
person Roozette
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww... I have been sitting her smiling cheesily at my computer since half way through this story. This is beautiful and hopeful and redeeming and I just love it! Another great job :)

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