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December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, so far this is fun. I look forward to more... Is it illegal to transfigure or in this case potion your student... er helper, into a small animal?
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
It's funny and witty and made me smile all the way through...
Images of leather, trampolines and whipped cream helped as well :D
Keep it up I'm intreged
It's funny and witty and made me smile all the way through...
Images of leather, trampolines and whipped cream helped as well :D
Keep it up I'm intreged
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 2)
Still loving it.....and had a laugh at the title and action....Snape berating a small animal.....wonder who she is?
This story is a little....fragmented...or disjointed? (not sure of the correct way to describe it) almost like a dream, but I find I like that..it's different from the norm. I'm looking forward to more chapters as soon as you can.
And thanks so much for the mention! I am enjoying the story!
Still loving it.....and had a laugh at the title and action....Snape berating a small animal.....wonder who she is?
This story is a little....fragmented...or disjointed? (not sure of the correct way to describe it) almost like a dream, but I find I like that..it's different from the norm. I'm looking forward to more chapters as soon as you can.
And thanks so much for the mention! I am enjoying the story!
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. Please continue.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear.. something is up. Please keep up the good work.
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, it's very British, your sense of humour.
It's very good, but just a small suggestion. Your writing is just a little rough, as if it was done all on one go without too much thought to tweaking it afterwards. With a tiny bit of smoothing out, this could be absolutely fantastic, instead of just really good.
Other than that, your writing style and your dialogue is witty, very droll and well worth the read. Hope you update soon!
It's very good, but just a small suggestion. Your writing is just a little rough, as if it was done all on one go without too much thought to tweaking it afterwards. With a tiny bit of smoothing out, this could be absolutely fantastic, instead of just really good.
Other than that, your writing style and your dialogue is witty, very droll and well worth the read. Hope you update soon!
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee, oh I can see this is gonna be hella funny! Greatly looking forward to reading more. ^_^
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
Love Snape and McGonagall's "banter", and I like Harry's wide-eyed goggling, being on the teacher side of things now instead of the student side. I like the sarcastic humour.
Update soon please!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has lots of promise. I hope you plan on keeping this story going. I do love 'Professor Potter.' He's not so different than the rest of us (Save that he has a magic wand....and magical it is...). Look forward to more!!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting I'm curious to see how this turns out