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Ok, so I've got that way excited feeling in my stomach and you're making us all wait! I'll just idle desperately I guess...le sigh.

Ok, I'm upset. Poor Harry close to death always freaks me out, lol. Still enjoying it immensley!

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH
how can u do dat?!!!!!
pls pls pls pls update soon!!!

Who the heck's Colin? I've thought Blaise was with Seamus? And I haven't read of Colin so far. Enlighten me, please, maybe I've just messed up some things.

Ok, so I still think I love you but I now know you're a cruel, cruel girl. Leaving poor Harry there like that, just shameful, lol. Curiosity though, why do the evil ppl call him "potter" when all of his crew refer to him as "Evans"? Maybe there's something to that? Hmmmm, guess I'll just wait and see...

Hmmm, I think I may love you...like a lot. This is quite fabulous and I look forward to a new chap every time I check this site. You're writing style is very true to star wars and space movies and I find that very impressive. And I'm totally lost on the whole Harry and the Prince of Gryffindor, is he or isn't he? I'm pretty sure you're driving me crazy with that one question. lol.

hi! i loved both chapters. both are a melange of emotions, both on the harry-draco pairing and on the remus-severus pairing. remus and severus have shown a great deal of maturity and sensitivity for each other in both chapters. the reference to canon was a good touch, not original but very appropriate source of conflict in their relationship. harry and draco are finally progressing. the shower scene and the fantasy was sizzling. but what i really love is harry's predatory character, especially with draco acting like a shy virgin. draco is so adorable - going after the soul stone to seek his soul mate. i just hope it's harry. draco is both cunning and vulnerable, an interesting but complex mix. i love how he is thinking of upholding his family honor to the extent of giving up his happiness. harry was the picture of a hero and a leader. keeping his cool even under pressure. i really love this fic. thanks for the update. ;)

Oh blimey, brilliant, amazing smut. mwhahaha. who needs a prince if you can have harry? =? lol

Why won't this little suspicion alone that Harry is Gryffindor's Prince? Sometimes it sounds like he's and in the next moment it sounds like he isn't and would fight the Prince to get Draco. I'm confused. Let me guess, that was your intention, right?

hi there! i don't know if you appreciate lengthy reviews but i'll do it anyway. i was thinking on leaving separate reviews for each chapter but decided on just doing a comprehensive one since it's gonna be from same ol me anyway. so here goes.

chapter 3 was well written - funny, action-packed, character-revealing, and most importantly, sounded very credible. i must say you did well because not everyone can write sci-fi and get away with it, especially if you're incorporating so much canon into it. i love how you managed to make a whole new story without losing your grip on the original and somehow twisting it to fit your story. krum's participation in the story added to the whole reality of how intense the fight for draco is going to be. i like harry's shift in character, shows how much in control he is.

chapter 4 was filled with surprises and more action. i really like remus and draco's playful banter. it reveals a side of draco that his usual character would not deign show, especially to harry and co. their closeness lends heart to draco's character as more than just a selfish brat. harry was really amusing here - maintaining command while trying to reign in on draco, all the while keeping the fact that he is the prince secret from him. harry is both emotional and rational - the well written balance of the two gives much credit to his character. oh, and i liked how severus came into the picture.

chapter 5 was filled with action and even more surprises. your severus was so close to canon that i must commend you for writing such a good characterization of him. the way you wrote pansy, no matter how short her appearance was, shed more light to draco's character. the way you described the interaction between harry and draco as shy and awkward but somehow secure is really great. i love draco's blind faith in harry and harry's warmth and attraction towards draco. this chapter allowed readers a peak into the development of their relationship. oh, and i'm hanging from the cliffhanger. writing severus as remus' mate poses another conflict seeing as sirius apparently plays a large role in remus' life. i am so looking forward to the resolution of their love triangle.

everything's running smoothly plot-wise. very nice AU with the touch of realism from canon. here's to hoping you find inspiration to write more! ;)