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for Star-Crossed (COMPLETED 11.27.08)

by ladybahiya

person Jan
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I felt so bad for Siri, but I guess he deserves it...

Please update chapter 21... *sniff sniff* the last chapter soon ^_^

Jan
person reid
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how could you do that to siri do you really hate him that much or did you judt need a bad guy in the family, i think i'm going to cry
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are going to be the death of me I know it haha but thank you for another great chapter
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well thats one way to show true feelings and take out the blinders. But.....
DON'T LET HARRY DIE!!!!!!! (Please?)
person Crzymoon
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, just, WOW.

I have to say I am absolutely loving this story. So exciting! Can not wait to read more! Keep up the fantastic job!
person reid
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh come on that was so short and ....oh your evil
person ZooArmy
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why does it have to be the end??? I don't understand. And it's one of the worst endings for a chapter to let one of the main characters die or get seriously hurt. I mean, WHY? *pout*
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! Sooo need chapter 19!!! And on their wedding day!!!
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i think i'm starting to cry like seriously cry....hope you update soon!!
person Jan
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Your bloody brilliant... and Evil!!! great place to end that chapter, but your evil for ending it there!!!

Please update chapter 20 soon ^_^

Jan