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for The Curse

by Roedhunt

person SP777
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #1-3...

Man, gone for 2 weeks and this sucker comes out the blue...

I'll say this, the first chapter had me wondering where this was going, but by
the 3rd chapter I realized you have a good setup going thus far.

At least, I'm seeing a new spin on the whole 'MPreg' situation, which, in reality,
is hard to do. After all, how many directions CAN a person go with it?

I'll mos' def' be following this one, as long as you keep writing such intriguing
scenes as the ones you've done so far.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It would be so funny if they were in that 5%! Have the girl's name picked out and the baby girl cloths and have a boy in the end! I picture Harry and Draco's face and have to laugh! But then I think of Lucy with a granddaughter! Funny! Love the story!
person ZooArmy
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry and Draco are going to make a baby. Whoooohoooo!
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you should just make it twins, a girl and a boy.
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 3!
person Mangacat
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well.. a rock and a hard place, really. I hope that Harry's up to the challenge, but I've got the feeling this is going to turn 'huge mess' up a nodge or few.. well, on with it!!
Cat
person Jilliane
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Very interesting and original explanation for mpreg. Nice how you drew it out too. I'm liking this story. Update soon, please!
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for chapter 2 it was lovely, now...onward to chapter 3 please!
person Sakya
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Harry Clueless Potter.

But is really not his fault is it? Nobody told him anything, it is like they wanted Harry to fall in this trap.
Yeah, I can see the doctor/patient thing going on for Poppy and shame doing the same for Malfoy, but still, how can they complain now?
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story, more