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for The Curse

by Roedhunt

schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh those 2!!! Sooo need chapter 6!!!
person MewMew2
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this is one of the more unique story beginnings that I have read. Well done. Please update when you have the time to do so.
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving this. I'm so glad I decided to check it out. (^^,) MORE, MORE, MORE!!! (^^,)
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can we get an eppy?
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's it? i hope there's another chapter. i thought the story was going somewhere
person Jan
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe you ended the story there!!! It's completely unfinished!!!

Sorry, I know I'm new and your probably like, Who the F**k do you think you are?!

But, I wouldn't have dared if it wasn't for the simplest of fact that I loved this story up until the "ending". I love your style of writing and everything, but this ending leaves a lot of opening! Hence the reason why I'm hoping that you went with this ending to make is more exciting, and are already typing your sequel, even as I type in this review! Cause seriously there has to be more!

Please say there's going to be more :((

Jan
person Utopia
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant! MalePreg becomes all the more possible with magic - but this was a believable reason for it! The curse was a simply FANTASTIC plot device!

The smut, though not graphic, was really good. It wasn't crass and was accurate.

This was a pleasure to read.
12/10
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, the emotions were cute. And the sex was hot! Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person SP777
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

Whoa!!! 5 hours straight?!? O_o

Go Harry & Draco!!!

Alright, this may sound a little crazy, but this story is SO interesting to me
that I think I'm going to have to wait for TWO chapters to be posted each
time, in order to be satisfied, because reading one isn't enough...and that's an ACTUAL first for me to be doing this.

But, then again, most stories I've read in the past were either completed OR
actually completed by the time I'd get to them. So, waiting was never a chore.
person SP777
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
con't...

oh, for what it's worth, I can't see this being 'THE END'. It feels
too incomplete...unless you are doing another continuation of this story.

I mean, good Lord...what about the baby?!?