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for Yes, Headmaster

by MistressV

schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm soo sorry that your flash drive offed itself. I hope you are able to update soon. I had to reread the chapter, cause my blondeness showed, and I was confused, but I got it. Good job.
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I need more LOL, how sad was harrys death....and dean...god..... *wails*

please update soon!
person lokilani
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am interested to see where it will go, can't wait for the next chapter
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, well, this story do looks promising :) And you are so right, we do need more Hermione/Voldemort stories here. I hope you will throw in a lot of smut :) Yes... I know... I am a naughty little teenager.
I don't really now what else to say except it's promising and that I would like you to contiue it ^^
Take care!
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo cant wait for more....LOVE Hermione/Voldie fun :D
person Nerys
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, we definitely need more Hermione-Voldemort in fanfic. There are far too few stories out there with this coupling and I like how you are starting this story a lot. So I am really looking forward to the next chapter to see what this 'detention' thing is going to turn out like.

And I think that whether you want it to be smutty or not is very much up to you. Just write what you like to write and feel comfortable with. Not that we wouldn't appreciate a bit of smut ...insert evil snickering...

Hermione would so not stop to correct others. LOL. Poor Neville should have known that she wouldn't be able to resist herself when he asked her not to help him any more. And I like the term SDA (Study of the Dark Arts); well found. How you explained what happened through Hermione's thoughts was clever. It gives the reader a quick insight into why no one is doing something or resisting the status quo. So we will have to wait and see what happens to our favourite Gryffindor. XD BTW. Did LV destroy the Gryffindor Tower or are they just not allowed to live there anymore? Or did he split up his former adversaries this way? I was just curious about this when you mentioned where she was sleeping.

Anyway, I will see what you come up with in the next chapter. XD Good job so far.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I can't wait to read more.