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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha I love Rodolphus, he's pretty awesome. You should definitely have him in this more. I'm so happy you updated! It's about time! Very interesting chapter, I'm surprised Voldemort didn't go crucio on her ass. He was actually kinda civil which was pretty cool. You definitely need to update asap. I can't wait to see where this is going to go. =)
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the corruption of Hermione through Dark texts. I wonder if he allows her to comfort others because completely beaten-down, hopeless, depressed subjects are less useful than those that somewhat willingly go about their day, or if he plans to destroy all their hopes by slowly destroying Hermione. I hope you'll give Neville some credit for strength though.
The clarification over the first years and Nagini was interesting. The pink snake mentioned in the previous chapter was amusing, although poor Crookshanks consumption is a shame. It's a clever detail though.
The clarification over the first years and Nagini was interesting. The pink snake mentioned in the previous chapter was amusing, although poor Crookshanks consumption is a shame. It's a clever detail though.
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read the next one to see what happens.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you should keep going with this story. I'm excited to see what happens. Please post more? Even if I'm the only one reading, which I'm sure I wouldn't be, it's still one person who you are making happy.
Please consider it.
Please consider it.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg what an interesting plot you've got going on hun. i love it so far...sad. cant wait for the rest of the dream and also the detention
please email me when you update..with the url
my email is on my profile
angela
please email me when you update..with the url
my email is on my profile
angela
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
btw ive got a tom/mione story also....kinda knew. if you read it please review it.
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I wish to know more.
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please up date this story its so good!!!!!
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I decided to review because i think its an interesting and different story, with an original idea which i like :)
Your right that there isnt enough LV/HG stories which annoys me so much!
Well i really like the story and want to see how it goes, hope you update quicker than i do lol-ive been slow lately :\
Thanks for the new good addition to the LV/HG section :)
Your right that there isnt enough LV/HG stories which annoys me so much!
Well i really like the story and want to see how it goes, hope you update quicker than i do lol-ive been slow lately :\
Thanks for the new good addition to the LV/HG section :)
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter was quite interesting; I wasn't expecting a flashback, just a smutty punishment session. Nagini turning pink is a great touch, although the death of Crookshanks and the punishment of the two first-years was rather sad. The systematic murder of the seventh years sounds about right--I'm glad you didn't try to intensify that by showing Hermione's emotions and pain--that would have been too depressing.