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for Yes, Headmaster

by MistressV

person crinna
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK so most of the LV HG stories i read are monotonous and repetitive. this is different. you are building on one of the shallowest characters in the HP series and doing a hell of a job. many portray lv to be a hex happy lunatic. but you remember his cunning intelligence. i have always wondered what would occupy his time once he succeeded in conquest? would he become a hedonist or would he not be able to stop himself from paranoia. i love this fic and can't wait for more.

ps i am interested on how you will paint snape
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im glad you finally came back lol. it was a good chapter. though i was hoping for some hermione/lestrange. oh well. next time I hope:)

as for lavender? hmm not sure. I would say either Lestrange or Snape?

more please


schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This wasa great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am also waiting for you to update.
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please
person kyocat00
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this storry please write moore sooon!!!!!
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do like this
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm sorry I didn't realize there were two other chapters you wrote. I liked the description of Voldemort's control of the headmaster's office and the objects he adorns it with. It really is how it should be in my opinion. Now he's got her off to those books that could fatally harm her? The bit about the tampon boxes was funny.
person Angela
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this

glad lestrange is in it
please write more soon
person Locke
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed your story so far, and I think it has great potential.

You write Hermione very well: she's tough and level headed and helping others in that way is very fitting to her character. However, I have special appreciation for how you've managed to keep the Dark Lord true to his own character (which I think is harder to do), with all his mood swings and precise knowledge of what Hermione has been up to.

Keep up the good work, you've got me hooked!