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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although marriage law is an old cliche but you proved a good author could make any cliche a good story. Very nice written first two chapters and the building up of Hermione and Draco's character is believable. Oh, just one thing. It would be better if Draco can stop saying:"Juses"
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a very nice two chapters. Fairly believable, given the strictures you put on them. Almost every bride looks beautiful on her wedding day, and, if, as you say, they'll have a week of bliss, I can't see too many problems for them Seventh Year. I assume they'll both be Heads; you could, of course, have one or both be in mortal peril from renegade Death Eaters, or, in Draco's case, vengeful former paramours. :D
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. I can't wait to read more soon.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep. It. Up. You have captured Draco in all his snarky, sexy, snobbery superbly! (say that 3 times fast!) I love practical, spitfire!Hermione, and you've done great with her thus far. Off to read the 2nd chapter! Toodles!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was great .. please please update soon .. later for now
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i have to have more please!!!!!!
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it and I can't wait for more!
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They are going to unite against the man by Falling In LOVE! I love this. Very original take on the marriage law. The Malfoys are conniving and I love it. I love the tattoos. Harry and Ron should be more supportive, especially Harry. What did they expect? Ron is always a prat.
I can't wait for more.
I can't wait for more.