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for Finding Freedom

by roundthatwist

person Izzi
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A really good story. I hope you haven't given up...
person Kay89
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! REally good so far! I really hope Hermione can pull herself out of this funk. Write more!
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!! i really hope he decides to go after her! !
person Citten
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay i love this story!!! lucius should be skinned alive, cut into tinny peices-being kept alive as long as possible and then cooked and feed to the dogs and dragons and any other creature possible. okay i feel better. now poor draco and hermione they were making real progress together until-him- well i do hope things will start to look up now before another criss hits. i will be looking forward to the next chapter and i do hope that it is very, very, very, very soon. :)
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't believe that Lucius not only beat Narcissa, but attacked Hermione as well. I am glad that Draco caught him and made him vanish, but I hope that they find him alive and bring him back so that he can go to Azkaban for his crimes. I hope that Hermione will return to Draco soon, but if not I hope that they can at least remain friends. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far. It is well written and Otis clear you've put some thought into the story, unlike a few other fics on the site. Can't wait for the next chapter, I think hermione needs to give ron a piece of her mind for being so rude and thoughtless.
person LilCas
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love It please keep writing!
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An incredible chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe, dear author...i love this chapter so much. it sounds real (for me) and well a lot of emotion from Hermione sometimes lol i secretly most like when she touched herself and Draco almost passed out xD i think it's reasonable since she was named "bookworm" and whoever thought she knew how to please herself and get what she wants and she is the hottest minx guys ever dreamed of! they should have been passed out if they knew this fact of her themselves surely :P and since i never found any story contains this scene so i think it's the hottest intimacy scene i ever read! *wink*

well, i don't know what author will surprise us next chapter but i have the feeling that it must be the point of this story, isn't it? we still don't know so please my lovely author hurry and update so soon so we can figure out what u have in mind!