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No. Nostrils is worse. Trust.

lol. Nose it is, then. But the pulsating stays. MY nostrils pulsate when I sleep . . . according to my grandkids, who get a big kick out of it. :::whinnies:::

Alien blobs pulsate not girlie noses.

Ho - kaaaay. I'm just going to have to take your word on that one. At least as far as the alien blobs go.

On the "pulsating nose or nostrils." After considering Dahlia's pulsating nostrils being compared to "horses and aliens" while Artimus obviously finds those twin flarings attractive. I have to say I think it is a matter of asthetics as to what one finds beautiful about another human being. It can be obvious or something rather small and to others, insignificant. I always look for the small things personally, things specific to that individual person, something that adds to "who they are" and what differiates them from others. It's always in the small details. What we can agree on is this: Not everyone has the same concept of beauty, and thank goodness for that. But some of us embrace what is not 'the norm' and again, thank goodness for that.

To illustrate my point, I'm including in this post a quote by the Italian painter Marco Celotti, in

LOL. Can't speak for everyone, but twasn't the nose that was amusing but the pulsating bit.

Yeah, I thought it would be amusing and a bit different from a writing standpoint. I usually write about Severus' nose flaring and pulsating for one reason or another, and I guess it was considered fitting, based on the size of his nose etc. I've done it a few times when he's been sleeping. His pulsating nostrils might even have been considered a little sexy by some :::clears throat::: I thought it would be interesting to have that happen with a woman, simply because it does. It has to. Men don't have a monopoly on pulsating noses when they sleep. lol. Or large noses. Apparently, female nostrils/noses are viewed differently than men's nostrils/noses by some. :) Dahlia has a broad nose, and it makes sense to me that at times, her nostrils would pulsate, especially if she's asleep and turning over, her breathing changing as she did so. In fact, I bet they flare like a bull's nose when she's pissed. lol.

Just couldn't resist the man in black could ya? So happy to see you working with these two at least one last time! And pairing them with your guys is great! Love your new stories with them as well- been a bad reviewer lately. SORRY!!! Happy writing as always and hope you feel better soon! Hugs, Killer K

Sorry to hear you won't be coming back after this. But, if you start another novel and you're looking for ideas, keep the gods thing in mind. I loved it and I bet others did too.

I don't like these new characters as well as your story with the gods. What about writing another story like that one?