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June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to see where this goes, please continue!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Next Chapter please I'm interested to see how this will turn out
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is this story going to be completed?
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not a bad start im very interested to read more on this story you should update
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The idea is a good one, but your writing needs work. Do you have a beta reader? This could help you a lot and make this work a better story. It's just a thought.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It's different, and funny. Gotta love people who travel in time that don't take themselves too seriously.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great start please please update soon .. later for now
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