schedule
May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule
May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well if you need Beta i could do it for you.. i do not mind i am good at it. only if you still need one. if you dont then that is ok... but the story is getting good so far. I hope she can forgive him.
schedule
April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good but its kinda hard to read. Your dialog is to close together and it gets a bit confusing. instead of writing it like this....
schedule
April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(:
interesting storyy :D
i like it very much :)
plz update sooonnn! n___n
interesting storyy :D
i like it very much :)
plz update sooonnn! n___n
schedule
April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule
April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was great .. please please update soon .. later for now
angel
angel