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for The Price was Right

by neelix

schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope that whore Narcissa keeps her hands off of severus
person Nboulet
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Wonderful writing! My first fanfic was a Snape/Hermione pairing ("The Tutor" by Nicole Boulet), and I had never written a sex-scene before. I've gotten much better since. I loved your story. Both Severus and Hermione were lovable and believable.
person Angie30
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous neelix! BTW thanks for the review on my new story, I will be posting a few more chapters sometime this weekend. I'm still looking for a beta reader.
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another wonderful story comes to an end. *sigh* Hooray!
person neelix
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw Thanks TQW!!!


*blushing*
person nastygrl
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again, a truly awesome, wet kickers story! Thanks for such a great read! You do such a great job of keeping the story flowing. The chapters are hot, hot hot, but well written with not an excess of words. Can't wait for the next one!
person KellyJCR
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow as usual loved it.. Can't wait for your next one. I absolutely love the way you write Severus. He has an edge but, he also has a soft and very sensual side. Patiently waiting for the nex't story you grace us with.
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, smut smut smut and smut :) and a happy couple!!

My mum got into hospital thats why i didnt review earlier, Sorry for that.

Your stories ROCK neelix!!!

Keep 'em comin' :)
Love
Jocy
person Tenar10r
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story, and like it so far.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was your first time? (LOL) You did well!