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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Wicked chapter Neelix!
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Hope we won't have to wait too long for the rest of the chapters. Suspense is good, but only for so long when it comes to a great story. HURRY !!
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that silly, sneaky Hermione! I wonder how this will end?
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness more! Cool. Intriguing end, looping back to the beginning of the fic. Now what happens??? Can't wait!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought the first 11 chapters was fine great even but wow you just blew me away. I can not wait to see where this is going. great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, stupid Narcissa! Had to go and ruin everything... grrr. I'm sure that it will resolve nicely, though. ;)
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah, handled the back door action well. I know lots dont like it but i aint one of them :-) wink.
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooh that felt like a sudden stop, prob only bcause I want more! LOL
I liked this, it was different. let's face it, infidelity happens. Well handled. Although ron was a real prick (why are women called sluts can anyone tell me???). But that is how men can be sometimes. great stuff.
PS: I removed this review and added back in with a small edit when I realized I made a way ambiguous statement! LOL Now there is clarity!
I liked this, it was different. let's face it, infidelity happens. Well handled. Although ron was a real prick (why are women called sluts can anyone tell me???). But that is how men can be sometimes. great stuff.
PS: I removed this review and added back in with a small edit when I realized I made a way ambiguous statement! LOL Now there is clarity!
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. What an epilogue! I look forward to part too. Poor Hermione. Thanks!
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay for one tiny little second there I forgot that this was part one of your epilogue and my seriously skipped a beat at the end of it. And then I remembered that there is more to come and I am not to panic......yet. lol I can't wait for more!!