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for The Price was Right

by neelix

schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, those two sure wore each other out didn't they. I rekon Snape was definitely taking little pills or maybe even a potion to help him along a bit. No man could surely go that distance. Right?

Thanks for a great read. Now on to a hopefully smutty sequel.
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person mlui
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe Narcissa was that desperate to actually try to practically rape Severus...it made her look pathetic! I'm sure Draco would be appalled at his mother's behaviour! I honestly didn't think Ron was that slow on the uptake, I mean, Polyjuice Potion only lasts for one hour before it wears off...there's no way Lavender would have been able to keep it up during when she sleeps. But it all worked out! =) A very nice story.
person Muffy
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! Brilliant ending. Thanks much!
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was just hot. I loved it....can't wait for more!!
person 666devil
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! A 5 part epilogue! How lucky are we. You are awesome. Thanks for the brilliant ending.
person Angie30
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my those last two chapters were SMOKING HOT! Well done neelix!
person KellyJCR
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well as I've said before it was fine as it was but, you have made it much better. I would have loved to hear Narcissas ranting as they left the manor. Great fic can't wait for the next.
person Tenar10r
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Just lemoney enough.
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic!!!