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Hi there
I am waiting with baited breath for the next installment! You create anticipation very skillfully and i think the conflict between Hermione and Snape is very in keeping with their characters and more in line with the atmosphere of the story you are creating. Please write the next chapter sooN!

Very good chapter.
I love this story. It's a SS/HG... but at the same time it's not. It's bigger. Hermione does seem to be the main character, but there are so many other important ones.
It doesn't focus on Hermione and Severus, they're just part of this swirling mass of story.
It's very, very interesting.
And I love how Severus and Hermione just can't keep away from each other, despite how wonderfully dysfunctional they are. I can't wait for their next lemon.
Also, the whole Pansy/Hermione conversation was intriguing. I like how they hate each other but still come to some sort of understanding (I hate stories that randomly have enemies become best friends it like, two seconds).
Anyway, keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hooray, hooray, hooray! Another chapter. I cannot wait to see the multiple confrontations in the next chapter!

WOO HOO!!! About frakin' time! Awesome job, dear!!! "Silly girl, you already do."- how HOT!!! Man, I shouldn't be so excited when two fictional characters have sex. I sooo need a life! Happy writing, luv! Tengo que blah, blah, blah. Killer K

omigod :D

so interesing and looky lemons n__n

hehehe addicted to this story is all i can say :)

you stopped there? Please update soon!

I've said it before and I'll probably say it again- Severus is such an ass!!! Poor Hermione, she must have it bad to put up with him!!! But, I love his snarkiness- true Snape!!! Great update, dear! Happy writing!!! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K

Beautiful, thus far. I theorize (and I am stopping for the evening at chapter 12) that Lavender is what Hermione should be looking out for. I'd like to see much more Hermione/Snape interaction, however, given the ship this is posted under ^_^.

I love the Hermione/Severus pairing and I love Severus's character above all... However, it's rare to find someone who I feel captures his personality perfectly. I accidentally stumbled upon this story yesterday after browsing the stories of one of my favorite authors on here and I was absolutely stunned. I spent the better part of the night reading and re-reading this wonderful, addicting story. I love the suspense and I'm anxious to see what will happen between Severus and Hermione. I do hope it will have a happy ending though, I'd hate to see my dear Severus killed off again :-) Thanks for the beautiful story, keep up the awesome work.

I'm glad to hear you've got a good plan for all the plots.
I figured you probably did, but I've seen enough good stories fizzle out because the authors decide not to follow through with their earlier plans or forget about certain character development that they started.
I just wanted to nudge a little and make sure. This story is so good and holds so much promise, I'd hate to see it become mediocre in the end.
Were you planning to have more of Lavender's POV? I feel like we only had that one, which sort of sticks out awkwardly from the more regular Hermione, Severus, Harry, Pansy Sirius and Lupin... though I suppose we also had a few other secondary character POVs, like Dumbledore and a couple death eaters so maybe it's not that weird.

By the way, I hope that you don't take anything I've said or will say VERY seriously. You're story is so, altogether, better than mine that I feel a little presumptuous making all these comments. But I'm just trying to be helpful.

Also, have I praised you for how often you update? It's like a little present every time I come on here.