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for Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy

by Lissa1011

person Apryl
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I know who Harry has to kill before Voldemort to end the cycle. I've had a clue since chap.21. But I won't say it here in case I'm right.... don't want to spoil the surprise.
person MooMandy
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Many hearty congratulations for your nominations!!! You totally deserve the acknowledgement if not the awards!!! So happy to see an update! Things are really heating up against Snape and Sirius! How long can they hold out without getting to hex each other? Snape was such a perfect ass to him! I loved it! And talk about sexual tension- whew!!! That bathroom scene, though short, was pretty hot! Poor Hermione- how disapointed she must have been! And I was very touched by her comfort given to Severus in bed. Poor fella- I can't help but feel that the poor guy needs a break and a chance for happiness. Just the ol' romantic in me I guess. Can't wait to see what's going on with the other people in your masterpiece. Update as soon as you are able. Happy writing and a really big CONGRATULATIONS!!! Hugs, doll, Killer K
person t1nuSK4
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, first of all - as a rule, I never read fiction that's labeled WIP. It is not uncommon for a fanfic author to decide to discontinue writing, as a result of increasing stress level, lack of reviews, or simply because he or she is sloppy. Now, your wonderful, amazing story caused me to break that rule, and here I am, writing a review and begging for a new chapter :)

The way you handle the characters is in some places reminiscent of JKR's style, and that's about as high as the praise can go in the HP fandom. Although I think that sometimes, you're taking great liberties with how a character responds to a certain situation, I still regard this fanfic as one of the best that I've had the opportunity to read. You have managed to capture the unique features of the character
person girl_with_wings
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter - my absolute favourite part was Black's howl of "SHE'S WHERE?" ! I could FEEL the triumph in Severus. Amazing. Brilliant. Please not too long for the next parts.
person MooMandy
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work, doll!!! Poor Snape! He's fighting this so hard! Hope things aren't irreparably damaged between he and Hermione. Still doing great work, can't wait to see more! Update soon as possible! Happy writing!!! Hugs, Killer K
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOO! This is awesome!! The only thing that i think could be fixed is how much Snape uses the word 'dunderheads' he says it quite A LOT in this fic and it sounds stupid, a lot of bad snape fics always have him saying it. Why not spice it up and think ok something else he can call potter and weasley. Other than that your writing is AMAZING!
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD this story is fucking AMAZING!!! aahh all the angst and torrid love affairs going on lol!! You've written Snape and Hermione BRILLIANTLY it doesnt seem forced at all and the love scenes are so hot! And the plot with Remus and Pansy is so cool and new!!
This fic kicks ass thanks so much for writing!!!
person girl_with_wings
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When is the next installment coming - I can hardly stand the anticipation!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg.. I just started to read this story... I love it. its briliant and i am sooo drawn in.. cannot wait to read more...
person MooMandy
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so much going on! What does this mean for Hermione and Severus? Trust lost? How heart breaking! I loved Pansy's patronus! I have a pug myself named Millie- they are such silly little creatures! Though the penguin idea was pretty cool- just imagine a little penguin waddling into the werewolf cave! Is Pansy going to have to go for help to try and save Hermione? So many questions! Hope to hear from you soon! Happy writing, luv! Tengo que irme! Salud! Hugs, Killer K