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I love it!! James is awesome!!!

Don't remember if I've review this one before, but I like it alot, it's really sweet. Please continue.

I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story! It's gotten me addicted to looking for any House/Harry Potter crossovers...know any besides this one? :)

Anyway there are some mistakes, but hey who doesn't have mistakes. Keep up the good work I look forwards to reading what happens next.

Oh yeah, and what about Remus and Sirius. Are we going to be seeing them? Is Dumbledore going to bring them in to get James to stay at Hogwarts?

Like I said, I really like this story and hope you update again soon.

TTFN,

Vampirezdarkgurl

Loving it; vague I know I will attempt to expound. Loving that Harry...sorry James has a back bone and is sarcastic, its brilliant. Love that you took Harry...James, away from his abusive family, that always rubbed me the wrong way. Love that House and Snape get a lone, they so would! Intrigued to see if Hermionie even gets mentioned and how far Dumbledore will fall and fail before he realizes he needs to leave House and Jr. alone, I mean really he is no match! I could almost see them enjoying Voldemort. ;) Thanks for sharing!

First, I want to congradulate you on an interesting story so far. I haven't gotten very far, but I enjoy it. Second, I would suggest finding a beta or a spell check. There were some grammatical errors that I did find. Third, I would like to point out that Leprosy can be cured, but it takes a long time with antibiotics. Cancer can just go into remission. Of course I should remember that the wizards don't keep up with Muggle inventions, but I wanted to clear that one about Leprosy up. If I remember my Microbiology teacher correctly, she said that it could take a year on antibiotics to cure because it is a slow acting bacteria.

OMG this is THE story of the year!!! XD James is gonna KILL Dumbles!! Rip him apart doctor dude!!! DO IT!!!! DO IT!!!!

OMG! I giggled all the way through. Good work! Just a couple things: I think you changed James' middle name from Evan to Alexander. Try keeping an eye on the small details in future writings. You also might want to get spell check or at least read through your work a 2nd time. Little things like typos can take away from how great the story is.

I like this story very much!! The only issue I have is with the grammar and spelling, but in a story as good as this, it really doesn't bother me. Please, (getting down on knees with arms outstretched) MORE!!!

I think the story is good. It seems to me that Dumbledore might pull Remus out of his hat to help with Brittany. And who is teaching them the potion they need. And since when is a genius so slow to learn something? (i.e. magic?)

nice story so far