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by faithwood

person keebz
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This single line: "And then he tipped Malfoy's head and sank his teeth into the tender, pale neck." Made this the best story in the entire universe! I'm in awe. It was beautiful and shocking and full of true vampirism (which the world seems to be in short supply of late) Amazing story!
person Michelle Wolf
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i take my hat off to you. that was a terrific twist to the story! keep writing! >^_^<
person vannilla
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the twist at the end
i was so sure draco was the vampire
it was surprizing and oh so hot to see i was wrong
and the sex in the bathroom the way you explained the coldness of harrys body
and dracos transformation was unbeliveable!
kudos!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Very dark. I like the whole mirror aspect. I was afraid Draco would continue to play the victim, as he did molest Harry, but I was a bit unsettled with his complete change of attitude. Still, I like that they both get to have each other for eternity, and that is what both of them are happy with, not forced with. Wonderful job. *snort* I'm off to your other sites now. Jeez. I count more than 30 fics that aren't posted at aff.net. lol I hope you aren't offended, but I'll probably only review the ones here and at ff.net. The ones in your journal and other places, aren't places where I have accounts.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo loved this!!!
person SP777
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit the first part had an ending that was unexpected and welcome.

I love a tricky ending. :-)

I'm glad you did a two-parter, because just doing a one-shot on this would
have been...well, it would have had a ''what the hell'' reaction.

...and as good as this was, I think you ended it in a good way. :-)
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an intriguing fic, capped off with delicious conclusion.
person Finvarre
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! that was a huge twist at the end! I was totally convinced that Draco was the vampire but then i was wondering what 'it' was... man... I'm still really surprised. Ha i can imagine Draco's face. hehehe what a surprise for him. Loved it as i hope you can tell :D Really good job!!
person Vitki
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy!
person Jilliane
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Oh good job! A nice surprise, for me at least, at the end of Chapter 1. I expected Draco to be the vampire, not Harry!

And the becoming in the second chapter...nice job at describing Draco's confusion, fear, then acceptance.

I love this story very much.