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for Let Him Cry

by quitedemented

schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful story. I like that it was written from Ron's perspective, and you covered the many emotions of all these characters. Ron's frustration and wish to keep Harry close, and not offend him was well-written. And I'm glad you gave Ron a happy ending, wounding him again at the end so the scar will heal properly. Having Draco allow Harry to be arrested, everything. You did a great job with this story.
person Dreiad
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful and fragile, and I loved reading it. You have a film-noir style at times and it's really neat to read that.
Thank you for sharing this story
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i understand what you went through bc i have family memebers and friends that do drugs and its all they think about instead of their families.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was beyond awesome! Fantastic story!
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I know exactly where your coming from, unfortunatly. The song fits perfectly!
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i'm crying. i'm typing through a blur of tears. that was so sad. i really don't like Harry/Ron's but i really couldn't help feeling sorry for him. even if i loved someone that much, i couldn't live through the anguish of being cheated on for that long. As someone who has been cheated on, i know it hurts really bad. But i still think it was great even if it was deprssing.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God that was breathtakingly done dear. Excellent job.