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by Tassanaburrfoot

person starr
schedule July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this was beautifully written !!!!!!
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing sequel:)
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good story, but ron does have some good points.
(1) crime like attemted murder are not under the school policy

(2) draco did try to kill ron, even under dross,

(3) ron family was in danger all the time, to save his family he would have to betray harry, he refused, for the crime that draco did comment he does deserve to go to prison.

(4) hermione not very smart, telling ron he just a jerk is not very bright, if hermoine was smart, i would ask him what happen, he was allmost kill, maybe ask how that falt and how sorry she his that he had that happen, but know hermoine like it no big deal.

if ron was kill would hermoine still be like so he had to save his family.


great story, just wish you would have show a little bit of why ron did what he did.


ps if some one you love was kill would you care why he did it.
good story
person kkwatson
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story.
person dinkyjew
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for finishing the story I waited and waited and it was worth it. I do like the fact that everyone finally got along. I sad to see that it's over, anyway thanks for the read.
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Great ending. Thanks for a thoroughly enjoyable story. With love ~Tem
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a very thoughtful ending............ Thank God you have the oder one ready to post. Don't be a stranger...........
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the epilogue!
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I've just finished reading heart and soul and then inlaws in one sitting, and now it's 5am, I am shattered but it was deffo worth it... I can't wait for the conclusion of inlaws, I love this story, I'm hoping the next chappy will be about hermione getting pregnant with a girl and then lucy's reaction! I am actually excited for the conclusion!!!

schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why something so wonderful had to end............ because there is new ideas on the burner........... LOL