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for Mudblood slave trade

by RoxieRose666

schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I think Hermione is really going to regret trying to escape. I can't wait to read more soon to see what happens to her now. I hope that Harry will be able to find her soon.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... an interesting beginning. I'm intrigued as to how Hermione is going to escape...
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it so far! Please update soon

schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I think that Harry should start thinking about the list and how that drop of ink fell on Malfoy's name. Maybe fate wants him to find Hermione and is trying to give him clues. I hope that Draco can protect Ginny and their children from his father. I think that he should tell Ginny what his father wants to do and find a way to kill him. Hopefully Wulf will help Hermione to escape from Lucius and get her to a safe location. I can't wait to read more.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that one made me cry...write more soon
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I can't wait to read more. I hope that Hermione can be found by someone before Lucius ends up killing her. It would be very interesting if the one to find her would be Draco. He could catch his father coming out of the hidden area, hide so that he is not seen, then find a way inside to Hermione's cell. He could then question his father about it after rescuing her. I think he should start treating Ginny better since he did marry her and has five daughters with her. Hopefully he won't try to divorce her and take their son from her when he is born.
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhh :O

well Lucius is very mean :S

but apart from that the story seems very interesting (:

and well cant wait for more n_n