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hey when are you making more chappies and whats with the box and what happens with his creature blood powers and what happens with dumbles

I love this story. I have been waiting a really long time for an update and just wondering if your planing on updating at all in the near future. Contact me at eliseloring151@hotmail.com. This is one of my favorites so please don't stop it. Best wishes. ~~~~~Red~~~~~

Hey there

I can only agree with Skype. I hate you. I just read your fanfiction and wanted to ask, when you're going to continue, since it has been a while since your last update - does this sentence make any sense?
Anyway, I loved reading it. Certainly, I was quite confused at times and I'd have really liked to continue reading it...
As I'm not a native speaker, English writing (in lack of a better word) people give me hard times reading their peace of art by their choice of words and sentence structure. I really enjoyed reading "Crimision Kiss". It wasn't difficult to understand - that does, however, not imply that your writing is bad. It is only easily understandable for foreigners or non-native speakers.
Thought I have to admin you got me more than just slightly confused - and nothing will change, unfortunately - but that is solely because of the content. On this occasion I would really like to ask, what's that language that you use. To bad, we no longer get to read the resolution but I guess it can't be helped.

I realy like this story you should continue it.

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This is wonderful can't wait for the next update hope it is soon.

oh mah goddess girly!!!yooh had better update soon! i am sad to hear some be-ach stole your stories. I was looking through my fav authors list and relized i had already added you, like a week after i got the account (in 2007). but back to my review:

This story has started from the ground up, I was slightly confused on some parts and I feel as if Snape and Harry have been rushing it. Dumbledore is one of my most favorite people when he is the villan and I also feel that maybe it'd be awesome if Luna were to suddenly kiss Draco in front of Lucius, effectively 'claiming' him in front of the head vamp(itd be so funny to imagine Lucius' reaction and Dracos embarrasment (i could see it happened in the great hall, around the Spring Equinox.... lol. 'mating season')

Anyways, Id love it if you'd email me when you update this story... ff.net wont send me alerts for some reason or another so id really appriciate if youd send me word of those stories as well.

my e-ail: Mangaluvver at yahoo dot com

Thanks love!

love love love this story! ^^ (i dont think my previous review has showed up O.o my computer died right after i clicked accept or whatever -_-' )
email me!
E'mail: mangaluvver at yahoo dot com

Hot hot HOT! dear gods continue again soon! with with... a SHOWER scene! another one where Snape is actually molesting him in the shower! twould be very VERY yummy! And I think I have an idea what other creature Snape is... but I'm not 100% sure. I wanna say a Nix, but I can't really tell. a water spirit of some sort, that's for sure. GAH! please update soon!

O...M...G...This is a fucking awsome stry!!!I've been really patiant(SP?),but I'm starting to get annoyed due to the fact that you HAVEN'T been updating.I've been a good girl and have told all of my friends(those that love/like yaoi any way)(and those whom even like harry potter)about this story,but now i'm getting pretty annoyed.I know you've either forgotten this story,or you've been to buisy.Or that you've just decided to torture your readers by NOT updating,but I swear to Ra,you NEED to update!!!It's killing me to not beable to read further into the story because you're not updating!!!So on behalf of all your readers(or those whom haven't reviewed yet),PLEASE REVIEW!!!(Also,please don't hate me or send me hate mail for this!!!I love this story to much,aswell as you for that matter-even though I don't know you,just so you know-for you to stop updating!!!)