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for Crimsion Kiss

by yaoified

schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay good start to your story, but there are a few things that need to be smoothed over in the first two chapters. Other than that, the plot is great, but why won't Harry's friends tell him about what was in the papers over the summer and about his heritage that they obviously know?
person Selera
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dang it.. if the story is finished why couldn't you please update faster! *sobs*
person Midnight Rain
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How wrong! I can't believe their restricting them so much! Its interesting to see what will happen next. Please update soon!
person alma
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting developments here. More please?
person Midnight Rain
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Please update soon!
person alma
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting so good!!
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh....a magical box.
The plot thickens!
Please update soon!
MUCH LOVE
Dee
person kunitsu
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh this is truly getting interesting and I am curious to know what is in that box and what Severus has to do with it. Dont leave us in suspense for too long
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo whats in the box. Love this story so far. If you have a mailing list put me on it please.

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