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I really like this story. Are you going to finish this sorry our is it abandoned?

This story is pretty good, I love it. Hope to see more chapters in the future, keep up the awesome work =^.^=

~Kumoriko

I love this fic and omg draco! Poor him and remus and sirius are definately getting me mad, like wow and dumbledork ugh not even better!

wowo just wow please update soon thank you.

what about the mauders map...?? couldn't that identify where Draco was?? xx

OOOh I had almost forgotten about this story. I'm so glad I found it again, lots of chapters to catch up with! I wanna know who in the heck is holding Malfoy, and why the hell Remus seems to be siding with Dumbledore. Reading through this again I finally cottoned on to Snape's creature, *facepalm* I guessed a Nix last time and now I'm smacking myself in the head. As if "Give me back my coat!" wasn't enough of a clue, there's the connection to the ocean, James hiding the box that only Harry can open it (double duh), the painting, the research in the library, the sea breeze scent when they were kissing in the bathroom... Yeah I finally opened my eyes and caught on. Although I must admit, that is one hell of a creature combo. There shall be fireworks aplenty when Harry loses the bonds on his magic. Did Dumbles have a bind on Harry's mother? Is he not wanting Harry to take on his blood inheritance because then he'd lose his sacrificial hero? And when Harry finally finds out what Severus is and gives him the coat... is that what Draco means when he Says Snape would leave Harry? I know it's in holding with how all of those myths on that particular creature pan out, but I hope Draco's right on Snape not being able to stay away for long because it normally doesn't work out like that.

So loving the story, can't wait to see were the plot will go next. Though i cant't help but wonder why harry hasn't thought to use the map to find draco? Anyways love it and update soon!

Win! I find your charactors believable and the plot interesting. I have read several creature stories lately that take the basic charactors and plot and run completely amok. Quite awful. I hope you continue, I'm really entralled. My only problem is with Snape, his charactor doesn't appear to have any depth he's dark and sexy with fangs but no depth. Anyway, I hope to read an update soon! Thank you!

So was Harry's mom originally suppose to be Snape's and James Potter somehow stole her from him??? And what is this Key or Coat that Snape was mentioned nearly Killing James over and then later nearly choking Harry about a key?? The mystery does drive the story and I think it's very enteresting all in all.

Only trouble I see is some spelling errors and word errors, that cause the story to be a tad difficult to understand but the gist of the story is there and it is a very interesting story to me anway.

ok you really need to finish this.