rate_review Reviews

God this story is good! Please more!

It is almost funny in a way, you can see the Malfoys crumbling before your eyes... I wonder if the other

oh wow, I like

Almost feel sorry for Lucius! Will there be a chapter 3?

This was brilliantly writen. feels like an eerie, tragic lovestory, nearly like a classic ghost story. Really well writen, beutiful even.

i like it!

I like this story as it is. However, I wonder if I would like this story as a multichapter. Not because I'm looking for a particular ending or anything, but I feel that Draco was set up with an interesting dilemma and I would like to see the effects on his character on the long run. Like if it gets to the point where health wise he is not allowed to drink any more of the dreamless potion and the nightmare start again, what would that mean for his sanity, would he start confusing his dreams with reality or start to question 'the doll's' reactions. Would Potter's ghost haunt him then treat him with pity as Draco becomes more paranoid and more violent? I dunno, I still like it as a one shot. Good work!

Phew that was hardcore my love! I like how you left the end very ambiguous...^.^ Please keep writing!

Interesting concept. I love the story and the idea as well. You should do a story that begns just like this one only some how harry's soul finds his way back . . . without draco's knowledge of course. How funny would it be if harry's soul was there all along just waiting for the right time giving draco those horrible nightmares.

That is...incredibly disturbing. In a good way, though.