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for Lovely Bones

by emilywaters

person cravedom
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo interesting! You really come up with the most intriguing ideas.

I really liked that the characters had such individual feelings and reasons to behave the way they did, and that they were all so human. Even Voldemort had a rather human if cruel behavior.

Perhaps what I like the most is what you don
person Aufie
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This one nearly made me cry. Excellent, as always.
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh God....This was so good!
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is left wide open for a sequal. I hope you'll make one.
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh....what a unique twist on the story. Very nice chapter!
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think death would have been better for all of them. Even though their souls are no longer there.
person Kendra Lee
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Amazing use of Barret-Brownings sonnet, it fits really well.
person SoftObsidian74
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I didn't know you continued this...these are all so haunting, creepy and beautiful Emily. I really really loved the second and third one...well shit, all of them....but I think the second one is really striking. Your mind is wicked for thinking of this. It's amazing in waking death that these characters come to life as themselves while still falling short of the fantasies the people who keep them want them to be. Excellent...as usual...write more..please
person SoftObsidian74
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:::shudder::: I expected nothing less from the dark lord...that was bloody awful, sadistic, and fulfilling, because as much as he wants to hurt him, he knows he'll never really be able to the way he's aching to..haha take that asshole.
person Ash
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is really good. The first chapter kind off put me off but I'm glad that I continued reading. That was brilliant by the way.