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Just decided to try this new pairing and I have to say you make me love this pairing a LOT! I hope you update soon <3

This chapter was both funny and frightening : ) I like how you describe Draco usually ignoring his conscience, calling it a small nagging voice...lol. I can totally see the canon Draco saying that. It's funny that this small voice is always screaming when Tom is around. And wow@Goyle's dream. This is like Freddy Kreuger : ) love that...It's so sweet that Goyle is so protective of Draco, we are really getting to know him better as a person. He actually sounds sexy in this story. I like Draco's thoughts about both boys, and I was suprised to learn that Crabbe is actually witty but lazy. The fact that Draco feels he has the looks and that a pretty face needs to head the group is so self centered and endearing at the same time. I wonder if this plan of theirs to take Sleeping Drought will work against Tom though..and I worry that they wont' be able to wake up once he starts doing his thing...and what's up with Draco feeling like something is off with Crabbe and Goyle, is there more to what's going on with them than he knows? I hope not...Great update : )

Damn....one of the best chapters yet and most frightening...wow. just a dream huh? I wonder....will Goyle wake up with cuts on his back for real? That whole scene was just disturbingly in character for Tom...I love the dream sequence. Can't wait to find out what happens when he wakes up....great update.

@Ch 10. I'm worried...Tom's in the closet? I sorta want him to be and I sorta don't. The way Draco idolizes the Dark Lord and puts him over his father is so creepy and rings true of the real Draco Malfoy...once again, I have to commend you for sticking to his unattractive canon qualities that we like to dismiss. I like the communication though...it's like it's bringing a weird sort of humanity to his character even though he's reaching out to connect to someone who could hardly be called humane. Anxious to see what's in the closet..

AWESOME!! This gets better with each chapter!!! I LOVE that the younger Tom is split from the older Voldemort and that his course of action to rise to power may even take his older self by surprise. I LOVE Draco's yearning to be his right hand man, and the UST I'm feeling between these two. You can do so much with this....and I'm betting you will. What will Crabbe and Goyle do, will Tom get Draco to co-opt them under his spell the same way? Will the younger Tom try to undermine the current Voldemort...and how will that work? I also love how many sides of Draco you're showing...his arrogance, selfishness, snarkiness, vulnerability, greed....it's just all really fun. And there's even humor here. I lol@ this line: "Oh, don't make me do the name trick,". Please try to update sooner, I'm really loving this story.

I like you're story. I never read a draco/tom before and this is kindda new to me. Does Tom/Voldy interested in Draco like some of lover or are they just want to use him? I surely hope Tom won't use Draco like he did to Ginny T__T

Holy crap! Voldemort writes letters to Draco? Who would have guessed? He really seems to like Draco

Three new chapters in one go? You

What's up with the last chapter? It was only like 3 sentences...please post more. I really like this story....

I love the way you're fleshing out Crabbe and Goyle...it's so rare to find in fan fiction...and they feel real for a change. Draco's inner and external dialogue are pretty characteristic of him in canon...you haven't really romanticized him the way a lot of us do. the mystery of trying to figure out who 'Tom' is for them is pretty fun and at the same time annoying because we all know who it is...and it seems like Draco should know too but I understand why he doesn't...Voldy would never reveal that to anyone. Anyway, I'm just on Ch. 7 but I love it...