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for Tom

by SleepSomehow

person GellyBelly
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Duuude! Man. I love this story!
I really hope you update as soon as possible.
But I have a feeling that it will take you a while
to update. PLEASE UPDATE!!!
person GellyBelly
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh!! I wonder whats going to happen next...
AWESOME STORY BY THE WAY!! Just got done reading chapter one.
I might comment every single chapter sooooo I hope you don't
get annoyed.
person GellyBelly
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just got done reading chapter 2 yo!
I got all giggly when the poems started
appearing inside the diary thing.
person GellyBelly
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Roses are red
Violets are Blue
Draco is a fairy
And so are you'

Duuude! That totally cracked me up!
person GellyBelly
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4's make out scene confused me a bit.
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear you have writer's block. I was hoping you had this story outlined until the end. If you do have a skeletal outline, feel free to shoot it my way and I can talk through the plot with you if you like. It's a good premise and I want to see where it will all lead. SouthernNYCgal@aol.com. Peace.
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your story is really good. I can't wait to see what happens between Tom and Draco. I hope Tom doesn't try and kill Draco and just make him his devoted love slave. Don't get me wrong I like the Draco's friends but he is so hot with Tom. With a man that good looking and seductive, who needs friends. PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!
person m7d853f
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story can't wait for more
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! I can't believe they fell asleep but of course, everyone needs sleep...but damn. Goyle really got his ass burned up...thank God for his friends. I feel sorry for Crabbe getting his ass beat like that. Poor Draco, where did Tom take him? I'm so afraid, and I admit a bit excited to see what his intentions with Draco are..I wonder if the current Voldemort knows what his younger self is up to and if he'll intervene considering how fond he is of Draco. I wonder if Snape can do anything about this now that he knows what's going on. So many possibilities. Just keep Draco alive, please. Anyway, great writing. Update soon.
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you glad to be invited. YOu did an amazing job at getting my hooked here and I think I am planning on staying. I am glad your not one to leave a story like that and am UBER happy to see it updated. Cant wait for the next chapter! Good luck!
LoliT (A new Big Fan)