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for Drunklust

by angelfromhigh

person luvhp
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Rumour and Apple, LOL! I loved it. We have the same discussion in our household. Dear Lord, when that girl starts dating, imagine all the sexual inuendos of eating apples, LOL

This is cute, Poor Hermione. That's it, drown your sorrows and screw away the hurt. Couldn't have chosen a better wizard for the job myself.

And how sweet of him to tell her she's anything but a slag. Looking forward to the next chappy.
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggles( in sympathy of course) at the thought of the name "Parsnip" being dumped on some poor child...*
as much as I don't approve of shagging when sloshed, this was a hoot to read. I look forward to the next bits!
person kazfeist
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God! I didn't til the A/N: Paltrow, eh? :D This looks really interesting, and I hope you update soon. Some distracting apostrophe usage, but the plot's great. :D
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning. I love that Draco explained that he was afraid she'd change her mind, and right now, neither is expecting anything permanent. It's a nice change of pace for Draco to not be 6'5" and drop dead gorgeous. Mmmm, good shoulders are nice.

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schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Er, the code I typed didn't appear. It just italicized. Whoops.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it!