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for It Cannot Be...

by Lifvared

schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so close...we are about to find out..update soon xx
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more to see who her real father is.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! The suspension is killing me! This is going to be so much fun when it all comes apart! I cannot wait for the next update and I hope you update soon. Once again another amazing chapter!

Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Add more soon please. Can't wait to find out who her father is. I think I know, but I'm keeping that to myself.
person kmplease
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I love it, great story
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, not at least who Hermiones father is. A wizard, yes, someone who have a son about Hermiones age, probably not a Malfoy since this is a Hermione/Draco story. Due to the harshness in his words I guess that it was a follower of Voldemort. I could have guessed a LeStrange, but neither of them have children in Hermiones year, hopefully not, and most likely not, Crabbe or Goyle. Zabini? Nott? Update soon and let us know:-)
A tiny little whish at the end; Dumbledore talked about glamours, please don't change Hermione into some Barbiedoll with blue eyes and blond, sleek hair, 6 feet tall and a DD-cup. First of all that would not be the Hermione we know and love, seccond it is in a way like saying that Hermione ain't good enough as she is, and since she is my favourite character I would recent that:-). She migth not be Hermione Granger, well, actually she is, Granger is the one who have aknowlegded her as his child, and that makes him her father, and her a Granger, the one who is the biological father walked away from her and never aknowlegded her and thus have no claim on her. A change in eyecolour, and maybe bushy hair made into curls yes, more than that would make her a stranger. I prefer stories with Hermione as one of the main characters (as long as she is never, ever paired with Ron, I hate that pairing), but if all that "is left" is her name, much of the reason for reading would be lost.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It seems nice so far. Though will she find out at Harrys party?
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep I liked it and yep I wanna read more so if you have a mailing list sign me up K?

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schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo. Another step closer to learning the truth. Cant wait.
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooo interesting!!! Can't wait to find out more!!! ^^