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by EighthSaga

schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, when you come back, you come back with a vengence! (sp?) I am so loving this, Ha! Love how Blaise shut Draco up, per-friggin-fection, and your dialogue was perfect, it just flowed so naturally! Just one thing, blondE is used for females, OUR Draco would be a BLOND for he is all male!
person liz
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!! I can't wait for more. Draco is so confused about his sexual idenity. Its funny!!! So who else is in this story. Harry, Ron, Ginny, Malfoy's parents, Hermione's parents, who? Anywat update ASAP!!!!
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay I was looking forward to you doing this one. I love veela fics and I love Blaise/Hermione/Draco fics so this is just perfect. You've started it off really well and I love how Draco and Hermione are so stubborn about their fate.

I can't wait to see how Blaise changes their minds. Good luck with the writing.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was quick! I figured it would probably be awhile before you posted this, but I cannot even explain my excitement when I saw this.

To be honest I thought this story would be somewhat the same as Complications just with some Blaise thrown in there. So I am glad to see that Blaise has to convince both Hermione and Draco of their fate instead of just Hermione being stubborn and unreasonable.
person Snowe
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't make sense for Blaise to be a Veela. Draco somewhat resembles the descriptions we have of them in canon, but even then it is a stretch. It would make more sense--and be much more interesting and original--if Blaise were some other kind of magical creature.

I hope Hermione and Draco do team up to teach Blaise a lesson, because he's an arrogant bastard, which I don't find particularly attractive.
person mariteri
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely start, but I have a question. Shouldn't this be in the Threesomes/moresomes catagory? Well, wherever it goes, it's a great start. Update as soon as you can.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm addicted to this already that's what I think! lol I love it and I can't wait for more! *Sigh* I shall try to patiently wait for two weeks for more though....but I make no promises....lol.
person Jess
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I LOVE this! I've never seen a dominant Blaise in an Blaise/Hermione/Draco triad before. It's a refreshing change of pace. I can't wait to see what else you come up with for this plot line. I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter. =)
person punky
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
draco is supposed to be a sexy masculine man and in this story he's going to be screwed by Blaise?
person OUFAN
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I can't wait for more.