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for The Problem with Fetishes...

by alleycat88

person Ley
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I have one where Harry speaks Parasultounge! Oh please! :D

~Ley
person Viper
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot! How about a Daddy fic?
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm ... a poor oblivious Harry and devious Draco ... so much room to play.
person cerichan
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice...but is Draco gonna soften up with Harry?
Is Harry gonna get more accomodating?
other fetishes...what about Harry's hair? or Harry's hands...
person Briar (the second one) (not logged in)
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think there should definitely be some begging or maybe some D/s but not too much. I mean some real "Please Sir" shit not the occasional begging brought on from lack of orgasm. Just a thought though.
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwww, Draco has a problem! I'd love to know what would happen if he actually let Harry remember, or if someone caught them at it one night...
person Graballz
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Spanking, please? (That's a fetish, right?) Actually, I prefer Draco to be the one spanked, but it seems as if you've set these up to be dominant!Draco...unless, of course, Draco's fetish is to BE spanked (and he has to teach Harry how to spank/dominate him...or whatever)

Honestly, if Harry's the one who gets spanked, that's okay too. It'll still be hot. *wink*

OHHH, another idea! Well, okay so it's not really a "fetish" (or maybe it is) but maybe once they've been meeting for a while, Draco could want to do it on Ron's bed. (Fetish of location, perhaps?) And then, of course, the requisite after-scene, where Ron's running Draco down while getting into bed, and Harry just sits there, smirking because Ron's laying exactly where he and Draco just fucked however much time ago. *snicker*

Okay, that's all I've got for now, but this one was good! I definitely think that Draco would be nicer and Harry would want it...LOL YAY, YOU!
person NightLo
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is hot! Thanks for that, btw...for fetish, I never read one with hair, any good idea on that?
person kittycat30
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!! My mind is mush; I'll think of something once I am able to actually think. *grins*
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! But i adore the fact that you have Harry as the bottom. So many many stories have Harry as top and Draco as bottom. I find it too over done and your story is refreshing