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for The Problem with Fetishes...

by alleycat88

person NightLo
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh~~~ so many thanks and hugs for this wonderful chapter...and this time, it is Draco that is obsessed with Harry, not the other way round!!! Maybe now they have a relationship, they should fully explore their other kinks and fetishes...e.g. cross-dressing (I love Harry as a doll/lolita so so much)/ role-playing / toe / any marks? (e.g. birth mark or others)???
person Bastian
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like both chapters though am I to assume right in thinking that each chapter with a new fetish is basically like a new start to a Harry and Draco relationship. Like the first chapter didn't happen in the second so to speak they arn't connected?

Either way you did good for a hair fetish and I believe Harry talking about letting Draco practically masturbate with his hair is a lot more of the in depth fetish as far as I see it. I think people with a hair fetish enjoy masturbating, touching, smelling, coming in the hair. But I liked your take on it and I can't wait to see where you are going to go next with this. :D

Great chapters!
person Roozette
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha,,, oh hell, I really liked that! And making Harry's hair smell like peaches??? ha! That was perfect. Great job Lil my love!

Kisses!
Rach

PS
hah! you should do a foot fetish as well. Like Harry sliding his feet over Draco, or sucking on a bug toe, ar having an arch that Draco likes to lick. *shudder* I'm not really a foot person, but I know people who are. *shrug* Or, you know, just slather Harry in something weird - like pineapple juice - and have Draco lick and suck him clean ;)
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Hopefully by the end of the list of fetishes, they will be a couple.
person sanda
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo want chapter 3!!! What is the next fetish? Will Harry find out about their first time?
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm just wondering if all the stories are connected or just little one shots bc i think you should continue from this one. i really enjoyed it!! i hope none of them have a foot fetish though lol

maybe food fetish, or spanking?
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg poor harry. i'd love to see more!
person kalaway
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not nice Draco is kinda creepy. Changes tenses suddenly near the end, but really good!
Hair fetish. Food fetish. Hand fetish.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!