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for Cat and Mouse

by TheSiner

person alma
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking really good.
person dino1
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the inner turmoil that Harry went through to tell the father. I am enjoying how Severus is showing a softer side to himself, even though he is still very blunt. I hope Lucius and Severus are friends. I can't wait to see Lucius's reaction over Harry's pregancy.
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn really good. i'm glad since i'm putting off doing my school work to read lovely fanfiction yay! now i must go do at least 3 or 4 problems before going to read another story.
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! this story is hilarious! Please update more!
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!!! I hope you have the next chapter posted soon!
person h2elena
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh great chapter lol cant wait to see how lucius reacts to harry being pregnant. No wonder voldermort didn't want harry touched at least dumbledore and the others know now so they can keep a close watch on harry. I think harry will be genuinely surprised at lucius reaction. Lucius will be very protective of harry. The other pairing i have a couple of guesses to make Snape/Draco or Draco/ron am i close. I'm loving harry and lucius together so hot as a couple. UPDATE SOON PLEASE.
person k9asylum
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should invest in a Beta. The errors seriously detract from the story line.
person Makovaso
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, update soon. I like it.
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it! Hope you have the next chapter posted soon!
person kittycat30
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry this isn't your favorite! I've never read this one & I just adore HP/LM stories; they're just... yummy *grins* If you decide not to continue it here, please let me know where the whole thing is posted. I'd love to see where things are going!