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for Cat and Mouse

by TheSiner

person magentah
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Though I think you might benefit from using a Beta (and really, only in a few spots), this story is fantastic. I really wish Harry would explain things to Lucius--I don't think Lucius would pull a Molly Weasley on him, but would at least understand why Harry acts the way he does. Draco, typically, is being such a little shit. I hope he grows up!
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!! I can't wait to read what happens next!! ^_^
person sanda
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person h2elena
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good to see another chapter lol oh my a marraige contract ok well harry certainly made it clear the marraige would be as equals fair enough. Lucius quite clearly stated no divorce. Cant wait for them to fall in love.onto the next chapter.
person h2elena
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha gotta love those raging hormones. Loved the way harry gave snape what for harry is not going to simply stand by and let snape call his child a bastard. I hope harry and lucius have a lovely xmas together lol as its their first and the next one they will have a baby boy. They are certainly one hot couple love lucius and harry together they are the only hp couple i love to read about. Its always great to see another harry/lucius story as there are not alot of them. Keep up the great work. Can you email when you update please. helenaloud@gmail.com
person alma
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter as always. Snape can be such an ass sometimes... more like all the time.
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay another great chap ;3
I rly rly like this fic!
I was soooo angry with snape I could have burst
person Bastian
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that chapter though I think I should let you know that when Harry leaves to meet Lucius on their "Wedding Night" you actually seem to have the same two sentences back to back...didnt know if that was on purpose or not.

Great chapter all the same and I look forward to the next one!
person dino1
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow another great chapter! I wonder when Harry is going to really lose his temper?
person Niharana
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay hormones