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for Cat and Mouse

by TheSiner

person Eldorna
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I really appreciate that Harry isn't just slipping easily into this new life and persona that is being forced on him. The depression and confusion is well played against his growing fondness for Lucius.
That being said I hope Lucius pulls the sliver rod out of his ass and eventually realizes the psychological strain he is putting on Harry.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope luc figures out that harry wasn't a spoiled brat and ends up feeling like shit
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope luc figures out that harry wasn't a spoiled brat and ends up feeling like shit
person sanda
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapters
person sanda
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person alma
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice and long, a very good chapter.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHH! Lucius! Harry is NOT HAPPY! GET IT TOGETHER!

.....

Sorry.

But I don't like a depressed Harry. T_T
Please update Soon!
Much Love
Dee
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah please say malfoy eventually considers harry's feeling and not just the malfoy way or else divorce!!! or threaten him with it
person cravedom
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very enjoyable, I am glad you decided to share it; there is a shortage of good HP/LM stories. Snape was funny and snarky in this story and he was my favorite character in the story until that last argument he had with Harry, I will have to check out all your stories to see if there is more of your awesome Snape around. Also please don
person h2elena
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL Lucius seriously needs to get his nose out of his snobby butt and show harry how he feels talk to harry tell him how he feels and harry needs to throw a hormonal hissy fit and tell lucius exactly what his life with those dursleys was like and how he feels about lucius. they are crazy about each other really i cant wait for them to finally realize they LOVE EACH OTHER. OOh and as for draco that boy needs to be put over lucius knee and given a bloody good spanking spoilt brat.Cant wait for the next chapter lol. keep up the good work.Bring on the baby.