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for Hunter and Prey

by Seselt

schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL So we finally know Basingly's name. Hehe. Not quite what I was expecting.I could kill Ron myself. The jerk. She's kidnapped, raped, beaten, tied up, and now faces the possibility of dying by bleeding out from a miscarriage and he goes and pulls a stunt like that?! Makes light of her situation, makes her look like the bad guy when HE'S the one who cheated....TWICE! I just...I want to....GRRRRR!! Really another great update, I can't wait for more!
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So what's Fenrir doing these days? Trying to figure out how to get Hermione and his 'cubs' back I'm sure. Great update! I can't wait for more!
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Real good i hope hermonie do's not miss carry the baby's and a abortation or whatever else is in the works do's not happen i guess i am just saying i would like to see her have them. and take care of them even though they are what they are they did not ask to be born. or anything like that. sorry did not mean to rant. I do not mean to rant and rave like i did. i hope you do not mind
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh. Ron is in T-R-O-U-B-L-E. Yep. I love how you update so frequently...is this a previously finish story? Either way I love it, and I love the story and I can't wait for more!
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schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant update. I must admit to be curious if Hermione is going to take a "muggle" ultrasound of the babies and if we are going to "see" the result?
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Again I'm on the edge of my seat! I just can't seem to get enough of this story! Can't wait for more!
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So. She's back. Now what? Doesn't mean she's safe. Fenrir is SO going to come looking for her especially since she's preggers with his cubs. And will she miscarry or not? Fenrir seemed rather confident that she would go to term eh? Another great update. Slightly less dramatic end to the chapter but I'm still hungry for more. lol I can't wait to find out what happens!
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad Hermione is safely back at home, though I doubt Fenrir will just let her leave with his cubs. Fenrir got a star in my book for taking out the prat though.
I hope Hermione will keep her "Ron can burn in hell" attitude, I don't like Ron, especially not paired with Hermione, and being a cheater just ads to the pile of unforgivables....:-))
I usually ends my review's with an "update soon" comment, I don't find that quite correct in this case, your updates are so fast it would be insulting to ask you to do it quicker. I really, really love your story!!!!
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm pleased that Hermione got somewhere safer for a while, and it was nice to see Fenrir go for the backstabbing sonofa... But he doesn't seem like one who would leave her alone for long... These chapters feel more tense than the previous ones, and you're doing a swell job.