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for Hunter and Prey

by Seselt

schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope when I wake up they'll be another chapter, cause that was just mean :) btw, love the story so far
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.
person wicraven
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person wicraven
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person wicraven
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I loved this chapter. I hope that she really is back with Fenrir and not just dreaming. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa! that was a lot of new info for so few chapters. was hermione infected? and what about the raw meat? did lucius return early and help fenrir. but wasn't L under a memory charm? tell me it wasn't draco. please. great chapter i can't wait for more. how long do you plan for this to be.
person Extraho
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn, i thought he was dead! though it;s sweet how the babies respond to him.
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this. i can't believe i let so many chapters pass before reading this fic. it draws you in. the story is exciting and the characters are written so well. i feel empathy for them. and these last few chapters finally hermione is getting some nookie she wants. so now that the potion won't be of any use to her what happens to the babies? she's trying to find a cure will it be ready to give to the babies? will it even work since they will be born with it and not infected at a later time? i look forward to reading more.