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for Hunter and Prey

by Seselt

schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a great story. That last chapter took my breath away :D
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:O That was amazing!!! Although I would have totally preferred if she had given in and they lived happily ever after with lots and lots of puppehs :D

I don't know what else to say, the story was so long. I loved it, especially the chapters with Greyback!! I need more :(
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. this was my first hermione and fenrir story. it was hot and steamy :)
person sbrande
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a wonderful story. Your writing is fantastic and the way you sucked me into the story was great. Your use of the english langauge was terrific too, as you don't see much of that on these unbetaered websites.

Thank you so very much for writing this tale.

Love Sonia :)
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, It took me a few days to read it all,
but it was great!!
The rape scenes were very disturbing!! *shudders*
great job though, I will be reading the sequel!! :o)
xoxo
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM


schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM

schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM

She glanced down as Draco shifted forward a little and caught one of her nipples gently between his teeth. His tongue flicked over the terribly sensitised bud. Hermione shivered. He sucked lightly wondering if he would get a taste of her. He had not had his fill of the witch yet.


thats a hot part...btw love that Draco was at the hospital holding her hand
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM

schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM

For no sensible reason, Hermione started to cry. Draco put his arms around her and helped her bottle feed the fuzzy bundles before taking her to bed. The next night she was more composed, taking notes so she could learn to read the changes. She petted them. It was much easier to tell them apart in cub form. Alexander was chocolate brown, Rosalind was bronze and Jonas was sandy furred. All had their eyes tight closed and cute stubby ears.

awwww how adorable lol




I love this story alot hun. It was hot but also good. Ive got to admit that when you wrote Draco into your story it got even better. I love Draco/Mione. You also write a amazing Fenrir. Nice job hun.

I hope that you come back with more sometime soon. If you do can you PLEASE email me? it would mean alot to me.

AngelinaGuerin23@hotmail.com