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for Echoes of the Soul

by neelix

schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter four was absolutely priceless comedy. I'm sure the only reason Dumbledore kept Severus around so long is because he's good for a laugh! And the bermuda shorts... oh, my. I absolutely cannot wait to read more!
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ron needs to be showing what happens to men that take all the blankets and snore. she needs grab all the blankets and push him and if he falls out of bed who cares he is an ass
person neelix
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol... I take it you don't like Ron then? I feel a bit sorry for him....
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay neelix :) Good to see you back with another story about my favorite Pair..so where to start.
I found the beginning of your story very intrigueing! It seems to be defintiely something else and
i cant wait to see where this will lead us. Seriously, Ron and Hermione could never be happy together.
Its fine for a puppy love, but Hermione needs an older man=Severus ;)
So i am really curious to see where you will take this and i am very much looking forward for the next update.

Love
Jocy
person Carine
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi neelix,
so you initiated a next great story of yours.I cannot wait to ead more.(((H)))Sureves Epans
person neelix
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Jocy and Sureves Epans. Its good to get positive vibes. This is different from anything I have written previously, a slow burner i think.

Will work on more tonight and hope to post tomorrow, but have to go to work... sad but true!
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH. Nice. Good heartbreak.... Well done, Hermione - high five! But, awww, poor Ron. :)
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so very excited to read where this is going. So far, I love it. all my favorite things are in play: Albus has been/is being resurrected (I assume) and of course, Severus lives. Poor Ron, he is so clueless. Good sex=orgasm for me. Hopefully he will find somebody he deserves. I cannot wait to read more.
person Tenar10r
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read your first three chapters and I like your story so far :)
person Angie30
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow interesting story you got going here. I can't wait to read more, well done.