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for Echoes of the Soul

by neelix

schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow 3 chappies and WHAT KIND OF CHAPTERS!
neelix you outdid yourself here. Fantastic! im lacking words to describe this.
the "mating" (can you call it something else really ;)?) of severus and hermione was unbelievably erotic and intense.
Thank you So so very much!
Love
Jocy
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a like this story (:

schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My hero! You write faster than... I don't know what! It's kind of awesome.
person carha
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay 2 new chapters. I cant wait to find out what happens between them in the present, and what happened in the past. Please update soon.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
civil is good :) civil leads to fighting leads to being more than civil leads to more fighting leads to sex *G

Love your story once again neelix and i slowly but surely start to understand those dreams :)

and thanks for those speedy updates :)
Love
Jocy
person Angie30
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus is always good for lemons. :) I laughed so hard at the last line at the end of the chapter...too funny!
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting.
can't wait to see how this works out.

love it so far.
post more soon
person carha
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. looking forward to seeing where this is going. please update soon
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel very inclined to say, I want more!....Please?