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for Echoes of the Soul

by neelix

schedule August 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, the background of the reincarnation was intricately woven into a fun, well-told an very hot 🔥 adventure.
person neelix
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dear AlanRickmanFan29

In response to your reviews - please can I ask that 1. You read the whole story before you review, and then perhaps it will make more sense. 2, please don't quote huge chunks of the story in the reviews section. I know what the story says already.

I wanted to reply to you personally but your email address is hidden.
person ALANRICKMANFAN29
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
why doesnt severus tell hermione the story about Iydella and Rasari, and Selene and Annalin? and

who dicided that hermione and severus where the past life of Selene and Annalin? was it Iydella and Rasari or something else and where hermione and severus always the past life of Selene and Annalin before Selene and Annalin where even born or hermione and severus where even born? also what does the the head master have to do with it why is the headmaster involved?? how do Iydella and Rasari know hermione and severus are past life of Selene and Annalin?

Albus began to speak.



schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
sorry i forget my password and user name and email address untill now, i also go by the user name ALANRICKMANFAN29 or ALANRICKMANFAN1983 or whatever the age i might be at the time that i review a story unless i sign in which i normally forget to do so!!! heheh

and the reason i quote is to show you what i mean when i ask what i ask!!! sorry about that!! but thats how i review!! also when you reply to each my reviews can you post my question and chapter that i aked the question from so that i know what you are talking about otherwise i wont know as i forget the question i asked and the chapters i asked it on or something!!! okey?? it will save me the trouble of looking back on the question i asked and chapter i asked it on or something!!! okey? thanks!!!
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rasari looked at Hermione.
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
his fucking her so hard that the bed broke wont THAT hurt the baby???!!!
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
2 words to say about this story:

BRILLIANT!!!! .... SEQUAL???
person ALANRICKMANFAN1983
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i thought this story was about hemione and severus together? so why isnt he dreaming about hermione why is he dreaming about someone else?? Severus was restless, his bedclothes on the floor as he writhed on the bed. He was dreaming and was obviously enjoying every minute of it. His silk pyjama bottoms were tented by his huge erection.



In his head, he was naked and lying on top of the woman, crushing his lips to her as he plundered her mouth with his tongue. Her hands were caressing his buttocks, her nails digging in deliciously and he could feel the head of his cock at her nether lips. She moaned beneath his mouth and spoke her desire.
person ALANRICKMANFAN29
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
why does the headmaster went hermione to have severus job temp if he wants hermione and severus together? i mean severus wont even be there to see etc her!!!! also Who are Rasari and Iydella??

Iydella waited patiently in nothingness. Her golden aura exuded serenity and calm. All would be well, she felt it.



Rasari appeared before her, dark energy rippling from him as he approached. He was displeased.